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Poetry in the Great Unravelling

posted by Paul Kingsnorth

11th August, 2011

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England’s cities burn, the financial system continues its inexorable slide towards the pit, taking the real economy with it,  socio-economic chaos stalks the declining West, and I am reading a poem. Specifically, I am reading The Purse Seine, by Robinson Jeffers. It was written in 1938 – over seventy years ago - and, like many of Jeffers’ poems, it is a prophecy. Jeffers revelled in issuing dire warnings of future horrors from his fastness on the cliffs of California. Sometimes the resulting poems were unnecessarily bleak and self-indulgent. Sometimes they were fire-and-brimstone sermons disguised as poems (his father was a  protestant minister.) Often they fascinated and revolted his countryfolk in turn, and perhaps even at the same time.

But Jeffers was a prophetic poet, and he had little interest in what others thought about what he was doing. And because he had little interest, many of his poems, over seventy years on, are more relevant than ever, while much of the work of his contemporaries is forgotten.

I cannot tell you how beautiful
the city appeared, and a little terrible.
I thought, We have geared the machines and locked all together
into interdependence;  we have built the great cities; now
There is no escape.

Prophecy is a strange thing, often a foolish one. This morning, I was re-reading our manifesto, Uncivilisation. I sometimes need to do this to remind myself  where we came from and where we’re going. At the time it came out, just over two years ago, the manifesto – which was, I suppose, a kind of prophecy, though that wasn’t what we started out trying to write – divided opinion. Some people, including us, of course, saw it as an attempt to tell a number of truths which seemed self-evident but were rarely if ever voiced. Others saw it as hysterical doom-mongering. Some people mocked the talk of collapse and decline and – probably above all – our acceptance of the fact of our powerlessness in the face of much of it. Times were different, then. The belief that we were experiencing a temporary disruption of normal service was still widespread. Maybe it’s just me, but I feel that that belief – that faith – is starting to fade away now. As a result, I feel also that the manifesto is more relevant than ever:

Increasingly, people are restless. The engineers group themselves into competing teams, but neither side seems to know what to do, and neither seems much different from the other. Around the world, discontent can be heard. The extremists are grinding their knives and moving in as the machine’s coughing and stuttering exposes the inadequacies of the political oligarchies who claimed to have everything in hand. Old gods are rearing their heads, and old answers: revolution, war, ethnic strife. Politics as we have known it totters, like the machine it was built to sustain. In its place could easily arise something more elemental, with a dark heart.

That’s from page 3. What we have seen on the streets and in the markets over the last few weeks is likely, I fear, to be just the beginning of what the next few decades will bring us, and the great unravelling continues. Not many people are laughing any more. The mockery – and the time for mockery – seems to have passed. This is a time for seriousness.

But what does seriousness lead to? Action? Inaction? Nihilism? Riots? Recently I was having an argument with an environmentalist friend of mine (these arguments never seem to stop. It’s my fault. I’m training myself not to rise to the bait, but I’m not responding well to the training.) He is involved in a campaign to industrialise the upland landscapes of Britain with enormous wind power stations in order to ‘save the Earth.’ I shot him an angry, and doubtless clumsy, summary of my feelings about people who destroy wild and beautiful places in the name of ‘the environment’, but he wasn’t having any of it, and he responded with the ultimate dismissal. ‘ Nice poems’, he said, ‘but you’re not really helping.’

Earlier this year, I had a book of poetry – Kidland – published. Since I was 19 I’ve wanted to be a Proper Poet with a collection to my name, and getting to that point, though it’s taken nearly twenty years, has been enormously exciting. It’s also been a strange lesson in the value of words. I’ve published two non-fiction books in the past, and their publication was attended by a lot of activity. The wait for reviews in the newspapers, the tours of bookshops and book festivals, the launch, the following of the hopefully-increasing sales figures, the promotion, the media interviews and extracts. Bringing a book like that out is a job in itself.

Poetry is different. My publisher organised a reading for me, in London, which went well, and after that I was on my own. Poetry publishers don’t have huge marketing or publicity departments (if they have any), due to the fact that hardly anyone buys books of poetry. I’ve organised my own readings and events based on my book (and I’m always open to offers!) and they seem to have gone well. But the impact a book of poetry makes cannot be measured in sales figures, reviews or any of the other standard ways of calculating a book’s ‘success.’

This is because poetry is difficult. It is – or should be – refined thought, refined experience, refined spirit, refined writing; boiled down to the bare minimum, the least and the most of what words can do. Poetry takes work, and it takes time, and work and time are both things we are unprepared to commit much of in our current culture. Recently, when I interviewed the (now late) poet Glyn Hughes, he told me of how, just a few decades back, poets like him used to sell books in their thousands. These days we might sell a few hundred and be considered a success. What happened? I don’t know. What I do know is that poetry still matters.

I would be happy as a minor poet.
The ballads of my ancestors come to me in dreams.
Duty to them a girdle or a burrowing root,
mine only to write them down.

In an essay in our new Dark Mountain anthology, entitled ‘Poetry first, engineering second’, Wilfried Hou Je Bek quotes the American poet Jerome Rothenberg on the central error of the progressive narrative – which includes the eco-progressive narrative promulgated by my turbine-pushing friends – in attempting to measure what is done or not done, what is action or inaction, what is worthwhile and what is not:

Measure everything by the Titan rocket and the transistor radio, and the world is full of primitive people. But once change the unit of value to the poem or the dance-event or the dream (all clearly artifactual situations) and it becomes apparent what all those people have been doing all those years with all that time on their hands.

To me, this is the worldview, and perhaps the purpose, of poetry. This is what it means: to counter the progressive narrative with all its fixations on expansion and control, on windfarms and transistor radios and electric cars and superstores and growth and measurement by results. To have time on our hands to sink into other ways of seeing. Poetry is the still point, the pole around which the chaos runs and circles, and the duty of the poet is to remain still, to watch, to report back in language which distills the essence of the movements all around her.

Of course, this is the kind of thing you say only after you’ve written the poems. Only after I’d brought Kidland together as a collection did I begin to see not only its human influences – Jeffers, for one, but various Thomases, too, and Merwin and Lawrence and Wordsworth and Hughes, and I could go on but won’t – but what I was trying to do with it. If you write a poem with a purpose in mind, it’s usually dreadful, but it’s always interesting to see what your purpose turns out to be, after the fact. Nothing in poetry is an accident.

Here you are, you sit between two worlds,
you are an animal.
The Earth is exposed to you as rock
beneath a spring.
You see more than you speak
because that is how it is done.

The purpose of the Dark Mountain manifesto was clear enough: we talked about fostering a new, ‘uncivilised’ writing, which saw the human, and the human world, from the outside rather than from within. Kidland, it turns out, does – or tries to do – exactly that. This poetry collection, in other words, is my first real act of uncivilised writing – my first attempt to do it, rather than to talk about it. I hope that, in parts at least, my attempt has succeeded.

i cannot speak to the whale
and the porpoise will not listen
i have mined and quarried the seas
but there are cultures in the depths that do not need me

Of course, whether a poem ever really ‘succeeds’, and what ‘success’ means is a question for someone else to answer. John Berryman made his views on that matter clear to W. S. Merwin in the 1960s, and Merwin later transmuted them into a poem which every poet should read. Its last lines are:

I had hardly begun to read
I asked how can you ever be sure
that what you write is really
any good at all and he said you can’t

you can’t you can never be sure
you die without knowing
whether anything you wrote was any good
if you have to be sure don’t write

Me, I don’t have to be sure of anything much, other than my need to try and speak in my poetry from a viewpoint that is as uncommon in this culture as the landscapes and beings it comes from, and to see where that takes me. That, I suppose, is the aim of my work. While a poem itself should perhaps not have a purpose, I do think that a poet should have an aim. After all, the engineers do, and someone has to stand in their way, however green they think they’re being as they build on.

I have flown
through tears of smoke, through waterfalls
of forest dust and home.

If you’re coming to the Dark Mountain Festival next week, you can hear me talking more about this in a joint reading event with three other poets whose work also leaps two-footed into that green void: Em Strang, Adrienne Odasso and Susan Richardson. In the meantime, if you want to read the poems I’ve extracted the above snippets from, you can buy my book and keep me in oatcakes for another few days. You can be assured that I’d appreciate it

Posted by Paul Kingsnorth on 11 August, 11

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10 thoughts on “Poetry in the Great Unravelling

  1. You said, “Poetry is the still point, the pole around which the chaos runs and circles, and the duty of the poet is to remain still, to watch, to report back in language which distills the essence of the movements all around her.”

    I replied, “Yes, and the friend of the poet is the philosopher.”

  2. Hi Paul,

    Looking forward to the festival and talking poetry. I’m afraid I don’t agree with you at all that poetry is difficult. To my mind, if poetry is difficult, it’s not very good poetry (I’m assuming that by ‘difficult’ you mean ‘unfathomable’). Surely, poetry is about communicating something, whether that be something prosaic or unfamiliar, defamiliarising even (which makes it challenging as opposed to difficult). If it’s too ‘difficult’ it’s not going to communicate much at all.
    Also, isn’t it our human resistance to the kind of thinking and feeling that poetry awakens in us that’s ‘difficult’, not the poetry itself?
    See you next week.
    Em x

  3. Hi Paul,

    “i have mined and quarried the seas
    but there are cultures in the depths that do not need me”

    We know so very little, but at least a few of us are curious, and try to peek, and, like the experience of reading some poems, the revelations are wondrous and mind-expanding.
    For example, someone called sean lawless wrote this on an Amazon book review, some tasty words to savour, like ‘kleptoplasty’, ‘phagocytotic’, and ‘cnidosacs’.

    “There is a spectacular denizen of California tidepools that goes by the imposing name of Hermissenda crassicornis. It is an electric blue and orange sea slug with wavy appendages on its back called ceratae. At the white tips of these ceratae are cellular structures called cnidosacs. Housed in the cnidosacs are nematocysts, microscopic harpoons that hook and inject venom into the mouth of any fish that decides to make a meal of Hermissenda. The truly amazing thing about the nematocysts of this Aeolid is their origin. Hermissendas do not grow their own nematocysts; they obtain them from their prey, in this case, the Proliferating Anemone. Instead of digesting the nematocysts along with their surrounding tissues, Hermissendas sequester them and transport them out to the tips of their ceratae via perpendicular tubes that line their guts called diverticulae. There they are incorporated into Hermissenda’s metabolism whole and fully functioning. It is a case of an intracellular symbiotic association called kleptoplasty.
    Another example of the “theft of body” of an intact organelle is the so-called “solar powered leaves that crawl.” The marine sea slug, Elysia chlorotica, sequesters the chloroplasts of the algae Vaucheria litorea. These kleptoplasts reside within the cytoplasm of the digestive cells of Elysia and carry out photosynthesis. The sea slug provides carbon dioxide for the chloroplasts and the chloroplasts provide nutrients for the sea slug. It is possible that there is a redirecting of animal nuclear encoded proteins to the chloroplasts as well as some lateral gene transfer from algae to sea slug. If so, this example of symbiosis represents a true mixing of separate genomes. Perhaps it is also a modern recapitulation of the ancient phagocytotic events theorized to have been the origin of the chloroplast in plant cells and the mitochondria in animal cells. It certainly speaks to the issue that the dividing line between species is more blurred than the lay public is aware.”

    http://www.amazon.com/Darwins-Blind-Spot-Evolution-Selection/product-reviews/0618118128/ref=cm_cr_dp_synop?ie=UTF8&showViewpoints=0&sortBy=bySubmissionDateDescending#R2NDF8U2K2MYPZ

    Best wishes for the book and the readings :-)

  4. Em – no, I don’t think I mean ‘unfathomable’ – though much poetry remains that, to many people, including perhaps ours. I mean that poetry has a code that prose doesn’t have, and that you have to learn the code before the words make sense. You only learn it by reading. I think that would be true even of someone like Betjeman, who on the surface is easy and jolly but below it has a lot going on that needs time and repeated readings to grasp. Poetry just is harder work for most people (including me) than prose. That’s not a bad thing at all, in my view. It just … is.

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  6. Stumbled upon the Dark Mountain and thence to this blog and find it all, well, fascinating is perhaps the best word at the moment.
    I look forward to further journeys into this collection of thoughts and comments and will do my best to scrabble together the finances to read the rest of the poems from which came the tantalizing excerpts you shared here.
    So much of what you share has been the topic of much discussion in my extended family here in Alaska, lovely to find so many like-minded explorers.
    Without wax,
    Mona

  7. Paul,

    I have been following the Uncivilization movement for some months now. This piece is well-written, I think. It is very interesting and a little frightening to be watching what is happening in the world right now. The machine we cannot survive without is dying, and we will have to go on surviving anyway. It is always comforting to find other people, however distant, who see the same reality that I do.

  8. “There’s an area where allegorical poetry gains a mystical influx of metaphysical certainty that is no different from theoretical physics, where theory is just another word for things we don’t want to accept as inevitable. ”

    http://youtu.be/JqgDzEqdvb0

  9. Hi Paul:

    Fine post. It’s interesting to read your distillation of Jeffers. I don’t think American literature has yet come to the clarity of thinking that you have found at your relative distance.

    “A poem shouldn’t have a purpose, but a poet should have an aim,” if I am paraphrasing correctly. Thank you for this. I have puzzled over this dichotomy for a long time. Poetry, which aims to speak the language of the universe, which has no aim, must nonetheless address a culture that desperately needs poetry, while at the same time speaking on behalf of the uncivilized, unorganized,and unhumanized things of the universe, which desperately need eloquent advocates. That is, if a poete looks around and sees what’s happening, and is honest with himself, he has to confront the notion that he has an enormous job to do. And yet, his first job, as you say, is to be still.

    I started and later abandoned a poem along these lines about a poet who carried a briefcase, a poet with a job to do. I eventually gave up on it, intimidated by the difficulty of transmuting a directed purpose into the indirected language of poetry. Sounds like you have pushed through to something good.

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